[Core] [Jharkhand] eggs in mms

[Guru]

thanks Jean for the feedback, I have shared it with the drafting group

regards
Guru

On 27/11/21 6:32 pm, Jean Dreze wrote:
> good initiative, but i think this letter is far too long and
> disjointed (way beyond the media's attention span). a few suggestions:
>
> - shorten drastically (e.g. drop all this NITI Aayog stuff, it's
> unnecessary; and shorten the discussion of fortification, it's
> tangential)
>
> - put something like this at the top, as a title: "Eggs in midday
> meals are welcome, but why just 3 eggs a week and 7 districts?" (as of
> now, it's only on page 3 that one gets to learn that this is the main
> point)
>
> - move demand 5 to the top of the list of demands
>
> - avoid too many "side shows" (and repetitions)
>
> easier said than done, i know - sorry!
>
> On 27-11-2021 17:53, Guru wrote:
>> https://www.thenewsminute.com/article/karnataka-introduces-eggs-mid-day-meals-7-districts-158010
>>
>>
>> Letter has been  drafted by 'right to food' group in Karnataka to which
>> Niranjan and I have added comments.
>>
>> Request comments/suggestions to this letter. I think we have a couple of
>> days to do this.. and then the right to food group will share the
>> finalized letter for endorsements.
>>
>> I suggest that  NCEE should be a signatory. Also we should strongly push
>> for eggs in mid day meals to counter  the very alarming nutrition status
>> amongst Indian children
>>
>> regards
>> Guru
>>
>>
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