[Core] [Jharkhand] eggs in mms

[Sajitha Bashir]

Hi Guru , agreeing with Jean and adding a suggestion for re- organizing 
- start with the list of demands 
- underneath , put 4-5 lines under each demand explaining current situation, why this demand will help and ( if possible) how it can be implemented . 

Sajitha 

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> On Nov 27, 2021, at 10:40 AM, Guru <guru at itforchange.net> wrote:
> 
> thanks Jean for the feedback, I have shared it with the drafting group
> 
> regards
> Guru
> 
>> On 27/11/21 6:32 pm, Jean Dreze wrote:
>> good initiative, but i think this letter is far too long and
>> disjointed (way beyond the media's attention span). a few suggestions:
>> 
>> - shorten drastically (e.g. drop all this NITI Aayog stuff, it's
>> unnecessary; and shorten the discussion of fortification, it's
>> tangential)
>> 
>> - put something like this at the top, as a title: "Eggs in midday
>> meals are welcome, but why just 3 eggs a week and 7 districts?" (as of
>> now, it's only on page 3 that one gets to learn that this is the main
>> point)
>> 
>> - move demand 5 to the top of the list of demands
>> 
>> - avoid too many "side shows" (and repetitions)
>> 
>> easier said than done, i know - sorry!
>> 
>>> On 27-11-2021 17:53, Guru wrote:
>>> https://www.thenewsminute.com/article/karnataka-introduces-eggs-mid-day-meals-7-districts-158010
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Letter has been  drafted by 'right to food' group in Karnataka to which
>>> Niranjan and I have added comments.
>>> 
>>> Request comments/suggestions to this letter. I think we have a couple of
>>> days to do this.. and then the right to food group will share the
>>> finalized letter for endorsements.
>>> 
>>> I suggest that  NCEE should be a signatory. Also we should strongly push
>>> for eggs in mid day meals to counter  the very alarming nutrition status
>>> amongst Indian children
>>> 
>>> regards
>>> Guru
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
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